In my book Rain it's a first person story. Rose is the one telling her story. She's telling us her point of view about when her dad found the dog to when she lost the dog in the storm and how she found the dog. She's telling us what is going through her head and what she is doing to find her dog. And how her father wasn't supportive. The tone in my story is sad. Rose is sad at home and at school. The only time when she isn't sad is when she is with her uncle or rain (her dog). The emotions she shows in the story is telling us how she feels about her dad not understanding her and how she has hard times at school. She uses strong words.